Bene quidem cecinisti, amice, sed versum alterum paullulum emendandum esse censeo.
Versus “canam eqs.â€:canam fortiter ales hic proterve
vobis carmin(a) expetita dulcia.
u - / - u u - / u - / u - x -> bene compositus.
Versus “vobis eqs.â€: emendandus:
vobis [- -]
carmin(a) [- u] (hiatus evitandi causa: carmin’ expetita)
expetita [- u - u]
dulcia [- u x]; fortasse: dulcja [- x].
Vale.